It's the first rains of 2010......And I have been working till late in the office. It's 9 pm, the Bus stop is crowded with people stranded due to the unexpected showers! Lightning and strong winds are making it impossible to keep myself dry!
I only wish to get into the last volvo to take me home! I spot my bus, and walk towards it as fast as I can and suddenly 'she' came in my way.......... " Shyam, Where had you been? I've been searching you everywhere on the Bus stand! How can you be so careless Shyam? I was so shit worried.....and look at me now, I am fully drenched!"
(I have been looking at her from the first second she appeared in front of me from nowhere! There's not a dearth of doubt in my mind that this is the first time I am looking at this girl! Because girls as beautiful as her don't cross your eyesight often, and definitely don't come to you and talk! I am lost for words.......She's fair, blue eyed and is wearing a full sleeve white churidaar that is clinging to her perfectly sculpted body! Is she an angel? )
" Now give me that jacket, fast!People are looking at me! .....Will you hurry up mister?"
I look around, the men around me are looking with complete disbelief! They must be wondering, "What a fool! He's got this beauty with him and he doesn't even know how to take care of her!! What a waste!"
I start to remove my jacket and suddenly I am reminded of the fact that I am not Shyam after all! I nevertheless hand over the jacket to her!
" Madam, I am not Shyam!"
"And Mister, I am not Nisha! Now lets go!" She gives me a naughty smile and holds my hand and pulls me in the opposite direction from my bus!
" Then, who are you?"
We stop!
People are looking at us now.... She looks at me with disbelief, then looks around at people!
" Shyam, Baby, it's 9.30 pm....it's getting late!"
" Okay enough! You are pretty and all that, but Miss , I am not your Shyam! You are clearly mistaken okay?"
" I don't like this prank!"
" Nor do I like yours!"
We stand in the middle of the platform looking at each other. I hate to do this to her, Damn! She is attractive! And now I see her eyes shining with little tears.....
" Okay, Look Miss...I can drop you where you want to go. Are you lost? You don't need to worry. There's a police station down this road, I'll come with you if you want!"
" Oh yeah? You come home and I'll show you who's lost!"
(She's clearly angry, but I seriously don't know how to react to this situation! How would you react huh? The most beautiful girl you've seen in your life is standing in front of you, but she thinks you are someone else!.........Clearly something's wrong here! ......Clearly she's out of her mind........Out of her mind..........Is she mad?? Beautiful girls always have some problem- maybe this is hers! Oh God! What to do now? )
"And where is it you stay? Tell me?"
( How can I tell a mad girl where I stay?)
" I stay in IndiraNagar!"
( I lie!)
" Is it? "
(She is thinking...........probably about how to prove her point!)
" Then let me see your identity card! Everything will be clear to you!"
( I can't show her my ID card!)
" I cant show you my ID card! No way!"
"Why not?"
" So that you come and follow me?"
She sighs!
" Your name is Shyam Patel! You work for Accenture as a senior Developer! You are 28 years old, and I knew you were a little crazy , but didn't know you were completely off your hook! And in case you are wondering who I am? I am Nisha Patel, your wife!"
Our conversation has by now become a public entertainment forum for passerby's! There's a crowd gathering around us, and clearly people seem to believe her more than me!
"And now to bring the show to an end, please take out your ID, and show it to the public!"
(I don't believe the conviction of this girl! I mean wohh! Is this Bakra day or what? )
"Shyam, No sorry, whoever you are, take out your ID and show it.....not to me, if you don't want to, but to the expecting crowd at least!"
(Why should I ? Who the hell is she to force me to show my ID card to the world? The best thing right now ........................is to turn away and run!)
Run, Run...................I start running for my life, as fast as I can!
"Oh my god Shyam........stop..............stop him!"
The crowd is all by her side......I am trying as hard as possible to break free from their clutches , but it's too many against one! Somebody is forcing open my bag, "Let us see your Id" they say!
" Don't....don't mishandle him! Are you okay Shyam? What's wrong with you?"
( She is looking at me with a worried expression, and I see tears rolling down!)
" Shyam Patel.......That's him...she's right! What an idiot!" The people mumble under the breath, and let go of me.
I sit on the wet platform, unable to believe what happened in the past half an hour. My life was completely fine until she came in......My life......in ................in.........what city is this? Wait.....where was I going? My home is in.........wait......my house is located ........
"Shyam........Shyam....look at me dear!"
"You don't touch me! You've messed my life here! What had I done to you? Why did you do this to me?"
I reach out for the ID which is in her hands, and have a look- Shyam Patel, that's my photograph there! Unbelievable!
I look up at her slowly......" What's happening to me Nisha? Help me, please help me I don't remember anything!" She comes and hugs me, as I shudder with disbelief..... "Everything will be alright Shyam, I am here for you! Let's go home....everything will be fine!"
As I get up, things are getting worse, it's as if my mind is shutting down......My eyes are seeing a world completely new to me...and my brain is not taking in the information the senses are giving it! I cling to her, with her I feel safe....like how the child holds on to his mother............
That was a strange Rainy Day, and it completely changed my life! It's amazing how a stranger co incidentally comes in your life and shows you who you really are!
I am under treatment now.....And she's the one taking care of me.....she asks me every day, "Shyam, do you remember the day we met for the first time? That was a very special day!"
"Yes!" I tell her!
" On the platform on the rainy day!"
And she just puts down her head and cries.......always, she cries!
Excellent!
ReplyDeletecaptivating!...
keep it up
(I wish u used some original title for this original story! e.g. 'Washed Away')
Very interesting... Nicely written... Was so into it till the end... :)
ReplyDeleteShweta
Thanks guys!
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I had originally named it- The day we met! Because that's the question she asks him every day, and wishes against hope that he remembers his life beyond that point! But all that he remembers is his life from that point onwards........But yeah! I'll take your suggestion Bhavin! The day we met - it is! :-)
Wow .. that was a beautiful story. Kept me guessing, hoping (even wishing, if you know what I mean ;) ) .. Kept me riveted to the screen.
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm wondering how I'd react if a beautiful girl approached me in a bus stand and pretended that she know me!
From this moment on, u wud 1st ask urself, " Am I sane or Insane??"
ReplyDeleteHmm.... Tht was a wonderrful story!. was it open to interpretation though?.. i saw it in a different light!
ReplyDeleteYes! It is open to interpretation of course, as any work of art is! :-)
ReplyDeleteHave u seen a movie called "50 first dates" ? I think you should see it.
ReplyDeleteGood one J! it kept me reading until the last word :) Look forward to read more such articles in the future :)
ReplyDelete@ Mohan: Thank u! :-)
ReplyDelete@ Anoop: Yes! I've seen that film! And it's nice! :-)
hey the article is very similar to U me aur Hum,..;-)
ReplyDeleteArticle aint similar! The psychological disorder is!
ReplyDeleteWhy doesn't the topic/theme label appear at the beginnin..it was getting freaking eerie assuming it to be a true life incident and u being the lead..:D.. Adapted the theme of memory loss refreshingly well....Interesting setting...characters played out really well. Develop the story further..turn it into a script or something. Great work!Janaki:)
ReplyDeleteThank u Raghu!
ReplyDeleteAbt developing this script, I dunno- Maybe the beauty of this story is in it being short!
Hey Janaki, so well written!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rounak! :-)
ReplyDeletehey....i just luvd this story....refreshing and brilliant....was glued to it till the end.
ReplyDeleteBy any chance....were you inspired by Martin Scorcese's latest movie "Shutter Island" ?????
No Ashwin, I hadn't even heard of that name until now but now that u've mentioned it, i would definitely like to watch it! :-)
ReplyDeleteJab we met... I don't think I know you anymore... From the time jab we met, till now, you have completely changed my perception... jab we met, you seemed to be so much different from what you are... Do I know you? Maybe, I need to rethink of every conversation that happened between us since jab we met.. :)
ReplyDeleteNow you know why I was invited for the wedding :-)
DeleteJab we met... I had a different perception about you... jab we met,, I thought I knew you... Jab we met, I thought you were a simple girl.... But guess what??? After reading your post, I am now rethinking of every conversation that we had since the time we first met.... :)
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